|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|LOL...this appealed to my 'weird' sense of humour. Nice write|
|Reviewed by Franz Kessler
|Great, imaginative composition. Very consciously portrays the emotions we undergo in a panic situation. Nice job, Karla. Franz|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|You, my dear Karla, are the very soul of clever.. with a capital "C"... what a read... what an EXPERIENCE! You had me
so involved I felt panic. This isn't just writing, it's truly cool expression! ("cool" being another "C" word.. smile). What
a mind you've got... Jaysus! katy xox.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Scary thought, I would hate that! Excellent Karla!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|HAHA OH NOw this is clever......|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Hat elevators.....that liftoff/down....leaves an awfull feeling in my stomach and head!!
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Scary thought being stuck in an elevator, ugh not something I want to experience...
|Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)
|Could feel the fear ............ great write|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Karla you portray this drama well instilling fear in the reader of being caught in a similar position. Wonderful write and interesting form!|
|Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp
|I really liked this one a lot. I however enjoy small dark places. Still a great write.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Oh I love the form Karla...great job...
this has happened to me...I was with another
lady and she panicked...I could just feel
the fear again...great write...floria
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
This is too cool; love the way you added visuals to your poem; can actually see the PERSON trapped in the elevator! This gives the poem new depth and meaning! BRAVA! Your creative nature is taking off with a bang, and it is exciting to see! Very well done; thoroughly enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|been there done that too
loved your write
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Great capture of the fear of this situation!|