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|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|YOU GOT THAT RIGHT "PRINCE"JASON! Always keep that name, Confidence will build with the words of the same!
STAy POSITIVE! My Friend!
P.s. I love how you write! VERY STRAIGHTFORWARD, BLUNT ( as I do) and honest! Abuse is TERRIBLE! Abuse is WRONG! SEE, you're inspiring a poem I feel comin' on! STAY STRONG! This is intense and I hope you are doing a HELL of a Lot better now!
Pss...Thank YOU for visiting me too Jay - Come by anytime.. I see this comment under me, is dated 11-2004! WOW 2004! I hope you continue writing, I mean that from my heart, I am reaching out to another of your poems! ALWAYS! be who you are, others will come around!!!Faith is what is needed in this world!
|Reviewed by Divinity 11
this is one of the more powerful pieces I've read on abuse. You convey your message clearly in your writing. I'm sorry that we have something like this in common. Keep your head up and keep moving forward!