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Walking away
by Denise Edwards
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I sit here, hoping things will change
but in my heart I know 
they'll remain the same
I put in all that I had,
but it wasn't enough to hold you
I guess  love is only 
what one believe's is true
I know I've  lost you,
and there's nothing else to say
so, I'll  pick up my broken heart
and just walk away

I packed my bags carefully,
putting old memories in  place
pictures of a life that is no more
keepsakes of your loving face

I can't look back now
I must move forward
and face this dreaded day
as I close this page of our lives
and slowly walk away

You've made your choice
and it doesn't include me
I have to let you go
I have to set you free
and walk on out that door
forever closing it behind me.



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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 3/17/2004
Beautiful, beautiful prose - finely penned!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/17/2004
I echo the sentiment of Evelyn and Jeff. Jeff's idea sounds good. Love and peace to you, Denise. Regis
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 3/12/2004
Evelyn read my mind, because Denise, this *IS* a beautiful song! I also have a melody in mind for this one. Sounds like a "song challenge" between me and Evelyn and... anybody else ?? Denise, this just tugs at the heart strings, and is definitely song-worthy! Maybe I'll put the melody on it, record it, give you a link, and see what you think. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon 3/12/2004
This sounds like a beautiful song. I have a melody in mind,
for it. Great write.
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