by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Thursday, March 11, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Agony! Pure beauty ravishes sight!
Flaming golds sweep mountain slopes, brilliance
bound on earth; uncounted desert poppies, heights
dazzled by spring birth; crowned, in opulence.
Amazement! Pure feelings; she understands!
Expressed with pleasure, her words sing with fire!
And when she cuts her long golden hair (planned);
its fate, to bewig the ill; she inspires!
Altruism! Philanthropy! Pure gold
seeds! Replant your heart into Mankind,
so we may reap true life’s bloom; to hold
respect as sacred trust is gold-refined.
With hope’s color defined, freshen jewel;
realign minds, back to the Golden Rule.
Photo by Erin Moen
This one's for you, Katy!
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|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|Goreuous and oh, what timing and what a beautiful welcoming reminder Oh, Erin, and this is so Full of Golden Hope and more...Love that ending, if only we heed!
you really are a gift!
as well as gifted, oh!
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
|The only thing more beautiful than the photo is your wonderfully penned prose!|
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|Beautifully expressed piece...best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Ok... now I'm fully collapsed.. weeping at full throttle... tissues gallore.. I ask myself: What would Meg Ryan do now? Hmmmm...
sigh.. darlin' Erin.. you move me, I'm full tilt here... The entire poem is, of course, etched upon my heart for its visions and
thoughts... but there I am, planted firmly within your very own words. I kid you not, I'm in my depths here. I do thank you..
I truly do. love, katy xox.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautiful Erin, this was lovely,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Masterfully created and deeply meaningful. Thank you for this offering, Erin. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Erin this is simply beautiful...you
do sonnets so well...I love your
|Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
|Beautiful Erin. I enjoyed this one very much.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Another masterful write from a master or mistress, whichever you prefer...I like the pic too, I can see myself driving my jeep on those nice hills...Peace, Ed & Rufuz|