|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|The blend of sensuality and romance in this write makes it one to savor. Wonderfully done!
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Dale you write with passion and grace that puts a smile on my face and strikes a chord in my heart when I read your work. Very good. Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|I fall.. and I fell right into this romantic write!|
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|Passionate and beautiful words...best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Sensually captivating write, Dale. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|BEAUTIFUL poem, Dale!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Very passionate and sensual poem setting desires on fire....|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Flowing and so beautiful emotive Dale!
so gently upon her flesh
just like her gown flows
around her shape
Her beauty moves me
As she expresses her love
I lightly hold her
like a peach
and taste her sweetness
|Reviewed by Michael Charles Messineo
|Dale, This is excellent.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
you fell haaaard! :) good on you--passionate, beautiful write
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Very passionate Dale...nice writing...floria|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so beautiful Dale, lovely poetry,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|O My Goodnes...this is awesome Poetry Dale!!
I am speechless!!
|Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp
|This is truely a beautiful write.|