by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Wednesday, March 17, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Snack box of goodies,
sweet treats of all kind,
I can't stay out of it,
for my own health benefit.
reaching in succumbs.
In my hand I hold a treat,
it taste good to eat.
In my head I have a joy box,
when I need a treat of happiness,
I reach into it.
I can't seem to stay out,
especially when sadness starts its route.
I humblely succumbs.
In my heart I hold a treat,
it feels totally neat.
A snack box,
a joy box,
a feel good box.
We all deserve a treat,
to help our souls feel complete.
In a sad crazy world,
feeling good is our pearl.
My boxes stay open,
just the way I be coping.
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|Reviewed by P. Michaels
A small snack between meals is suppose to be good for you. Like your poem, Grady.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Snack - and write - on!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent concept Grady! Always the wise owl;-)!|
|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|OUTSTANDING <>>>>>> what a leap from the earlier cynical slinding poems I used to read...you've come into your own and it is wonderful...always loved your work but this is outstanding...|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|You just made me reach out and gra a sweet,,,,,shame on you!!
But excellent write Grady!!
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|I love the nonchalant manner of delivering a message..EXCELLENT work, Grady!|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Sweet write and sentiments, Grady. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Excellent. Well written. Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|i don't care for sweets, but i love this write! good message in this write; thanks for sharing, grady! enjoyed~
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|I love sweets too Grady...
But to to watch those hips...LOL...
at halloween...I love to eat with
my grandson all his goodies....
loved this..it was SWEET...floria