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by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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the biography of many who do not fit
the image of "perfection"

i look into the mirror
it throws back a monster
with distorted features
                                            who is that monster
i look into the mirror
it throws back a monster
the world says i'm ugly
                                           that monster is me
i look into the mirror
it throws back a monster
it boldly laughs at me
                                           the monster is ME
i look into the mirror
it throws back a monster
the monster has to die
                                           that monster called me
i look into the mirror
it throws back a monster
i throw a lamp at it
                                           the monster i am
i look into the mirror
i no longer see it
it no longer exists
                                           the monster i was

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.



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Reviewed by P. Michaels

Karla, we all feel like that at times, but it doesn't mean that it is true. What's really important is the beauty which is inside. Outward beauty doesn't last. It is the inward beauty that lasts. Inward beauty is love, kindness, and a caring spirit.

Love, Patty

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Very well written, but there is no monster in your mirror, just a pretty lady smiling back. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, but the eye of the beholder does not always see the beauty beneath which is more important than the outisde. Remember that !!
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
great Karla, you had me going for awhile but you ended positively. cheers G
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Karla...
the greatest beauty does not without, but within,,, you are a beautiful person, think of yourself as nothing else...
God Bless
~Michelle~
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
I read the first paragraph and saw where this was going and think too highly of you and your sister to read the rest, you both are too pretty, too compassionate, too considerate, for me to read the above and enjoy it...Peace, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Glad to see you're human, Karla. I think we're all monsters!
Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)
Karla ,there is no monster existent that can survive inside the beauty that you possess my friend. We see hear and feel you as each poem or story you create reflects your true beauty. Peace and blessings. < < < < < <HUGS>>>>>>>>>Mikii
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Excellent write!Thank God for the last verse
or I'd be real worried about you Karla!We are
all monsters until He makes us new, and even
afterwards as long as we are in this world!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
But, You Forget YOU ARE A STRONG MONSTER!

TRASK
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Monsterious write Karla!!

happy St Patrick's day!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
beauty is only skin deep karla...I knew a
gorgeous woman once...I admired her for her
looks....she opened her mouth...and destroyed
herself...I never admired her again....
It's all inside....you are lovely....floria
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
You are very beautiful where it counts :: Inside your heart :: you are beautiful. Many can't say that for they are ugly on the inside
and sometimes beautiful on the outside. But their inner ugliness robs them of their outward beauty. Hugs and Love. Bill Murray
Reviewed by john zimmerman
ah,the cult of perfection!
What a crock---

Well written

john+
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
I like the brooding imagery in this powerful poem...excellent symbolism...I especially thrilled by the brevity of language...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
(((Karla)))

Heartbreaking, sobering look of reality and how society views people who do not fit a specific "image"; such a shame, really! Thanks for sharing this powerful, thought-provoking poem; you spoke for many today!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(
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