|Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
|"Let us speak for those who cannot speak, dare
revive lives forestalled and hopes failed; our rage
and pain be tools we target to assuage
those whose suffering through serving we share."
This is so beautiful Helga! I greatly admire your passionate work.
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Wisely meaningful, Helga. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a very powerful poem!|
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|"Surrender lament for songs rare.
They’d have made the music we must find
to fashion; reform this dance with passion
from lessons past - Present, future demands."
I think this needs to be a mandatory bedtime prayer!
Maybe, eventually, it'll sink in.
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Yes, words do matter. Our society is held together by the words of our forefathers. Within the written word, much of our important past would be forgotten. Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Powerful poem and message.
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|What a shame!!!Excellent Petrarchan rhyme scheme(abbaabbacdecde)...Helga!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent sonnet! Still I say, shame on Spain!|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Very insightful writing Helga...
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|Indeed, Helga...conscience commands.
And a great command of words you have here, too!