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Fairy Tale by J. A. Wise Saturday, March 20, 2004 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
The secret goes, they say, you gave you heart away for roses and pretty things. What nonsense. That was just a dream. Your fairy tale upended itself somewhere painfully close to completion. So I guess the moral of our story goes like this; there is always a once upon a time, there just arent any happy endings.

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Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	3/22/2004

Thing is, that "once upon a time" if not a happy ending, is with the wrong person. You can't force affection. It is, or isn't. Sad write.




Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)	3/21/2004

very nicely done.




Reviewed by Tami Ryan	3/21/2004

A wise write, Jason.




Reviewed by jude forese	3/20/2004

nicely expressed ... (drem, ny?) i really know what they mean ;)




Reviewed by Leland Waldrip	3/20/2004

You captured one point of view and did it well, Jason. Best regards, Leland




Reviewed by June Thompson	3/20/2004

to the point hard one well done. This is why they are called stories