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| Reviewed by D. Chadwick |
4/29/2004 |
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What lovely cadence and imagery. A great comfort for those longing
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| Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) |
3/30/2004 |
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| This was breathtakingly sublime to read Retta. Magnificent |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
3/26/2004 |
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| beautiful. felt the spirit and the burning sun. |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
3/26/2004 |
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| Your words are always moving and heartfelt.....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Amanda Criggstone (Reader) |
3/24/2004 |
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| You took the reader on a wonderful contemplative journey here! This is really special poetry! |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
3/24/2004 |
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| Always pleasant and beautiful. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader) |
3/24/2004 |
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Beautiful, moving poem....great writing!
Andrea |
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| Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader) |
3/24/2004 |
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| The sun rises and the sun sets and I squat once in a while too. Candy |
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| Reviewed by Calendula Petal |
3/24/2004 |
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| a wonderful moving write, but full of hope and comfort. The ending was simply perfect to me. This is how I would like to feel, if I lost my dearest one. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader) |
3/23/2004 |
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So beautiful are your words, Reindeer!
This is stunning poetry!
Love, Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
3/23/2004 |
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Oh, Retta! This is one of the loveliest pieces you
have posted. I so felt the words in this very deeply! |
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| Reviewed by Heather White |
3/23/2004 |
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| very beautiful write, i just loved it |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
3/23/2004 |
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| I love the personification in this wonderful poem! |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
3/22/2004 |
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| I love how you put nature in your love writes.... |
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| Reviewed by Patricia Gomes |
3/22/2004 |
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| Truly lovely - you are a master at this type of verse. |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/22/2004 |
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| This is awesome! So beautiful and moving. |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
3/22/2004 |
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I come here now,
Even though you aren't here,
Even though I know,
you traveled farther than I ever could...
Retta...what a moving write my friend....excellent!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
3/22/2004 |
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| Beautiful Reindeer...lovely lines...floria |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
3/22/2004 |
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| Retta, this is beautiful poetry. Loving words for one that's missed. Very well written as always. Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
3/22/2004 |
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A most wonderful secret, indeed. I like the way you write with simple, truthful strokes as you would talk, were that person standing before you. It's touching, inviting the reader to step into it.
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/21/2004 |
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This is beautiful Retta!!
Love the Picture!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/21/2004 |
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So beautiful Reindeer touched me deeply tonight..........
Excellent expressed emotions.
Peg |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
3/21/2004 |
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| Another beauty. |
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
3/21/2004 |
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Retta,
a beautiful and well developed poem
I enjoyed this
john+ |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
3/21/2004 |
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| Retta, this is a wonderful write. Very moving. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/21/2004 |
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| i really like how your poem developed and just luv the image in the final verse ... |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
3/21/2004 |
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| Wonderful things happen to us when we allow them to. Very, VERY nice poem. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
3/21/2004 |
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| I was just thinking about writing about the tall trees, the redwoods. Somehow, just beig in a forest rekindles fond remembrance. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader) |
3/21/2004 |
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My favorite place to be in the whole wide world is in the forest.
Beautiful picture and beautiful words to match. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/21/2004 |
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You bare mysteries of the soul , better than
anyone I know Reindeer....Fantastic poetry! |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/21/2004 |
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| A write full of love that moves my heart. |
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| Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) |
3/21/2004 |
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This is an excellent write.
keep it up...
Sanilnath |
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| Reviewed by J. Pajot |
3/21/2004 |
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| This is incredibly moving...I cannot even find words worthy of the praise... |
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