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| Reviewed by * Twilah |
4/5/2004 |
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These are beautiful, Lori...
Gloria |
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| Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart |
3/22/2004 |
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| Ah yes, some women embrace the rose for what they need, then find it is the prick that makes them bleed. |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
3/22/2004 |
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Romantic You_
You Are Strong In Beginning To Overcome Your Past In Future!!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
3/22/2004 |
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Great writing..
Have a good night..... |
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| Reviewed by Victoria Finn (Reader) |
3/22/2004 |
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Wonderful write Lori, this is my kind of poem.
love Vicky |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/22/2004 |
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Lori, you get so much meaning into your Haiku
they are exceptional! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/22/2004 |
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once we get passed the thorns of life, there's is only beauty to be revealed ... i like this poem and how you've broght it together ...
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/22/2004 |
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Beautiful Lori!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/22/2004 |
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'I will risk the thorn'
I loved them. Great! |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/22/2004 |
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This is so beautiful all of them Lori!
Awesome work. |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
3/22/2004 |
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Beautiful poem with a unique touch and a
special ending ....
Well done! |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
3/22/2004 |
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Oh Lori..thise are fantastic Hiku
I love them all but favor the last..
floria |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/22/2004 |
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| Very nicely done |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
3/22/2004 |
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| This is truly magnificient poetry, greatly enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
3/22/2004 |
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| Lori, these are wonderful haikus. Excellent. |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
3/22/2004 |
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| Lori, this is gorgeous! Gentle and demanding all at the same time. Great write! Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/22/2004 |
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| Beautiful, meaningful stanzas, Lori: loved the line especially: "Rain drops judge like men". Many of us seem to be tracking with The Rose at the moment! Funny how she never ceases to inspire. Loved this. KB |
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