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Escape From The Dark Queen
by Paul Day

After rescuing the lost fairies, Lily must escape the Queen's dungeons, defeat Denheroth and defeat the Dark Queen before she destroys the Kingdom of Fairies...  
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Big City Fairy Tale
by Zenith Elliott
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Hansel lost Gretal
he went to the store
bought some drumettes
began to explore...

Walked city streets
at a furious pace
an unbearable hunger
the drumettes he did taste...

Searching each pier
every one he explored
leaving a trail
of the bones, he ignored...

Mice disguised as men
scurried after his trail
now Gretal
are both, no more...

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Reviewed by J. D. Maris
lol twisted and irristable
I wonder if Hansel is like all men
exhibiting a one track mind?
:) Donna
Reviewed by andrea coltman
Thought provoking twist..enjoyed wishes Andrea
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Chillingly thought-provoking, Zenith. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Zenith, looks like Mother Goose got cooked. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
lol. Life ain't glamourous in the big city. We have just as much talent in a small town. Good one, Z.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
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Reviewed by Ed Matlack
A fairy "trail" updated for the 21st century, very appropriate and quite excellent, ~Z~. Peace thru Fantasy, Ed & Rufuz
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Satan Is Disquised Also As El Presidente Bush Even Your Best Friend-Do
Be Careful Who Smiles At You!


Reviewed by E. Richardson
well done, Zenith...nicely done, dark twist on Mother Goose.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
You did a great job on this twist;-)very graphic...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Clever write, Z! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Very nicly done Zenith!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by George Carroll
Very nicely done
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was great! Loved this modern fairy tale!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Nice fairy tale, Z.
Best regards,
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