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Big City Fairy Tale
by Zenith Elliott

Monday, March 22, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Hansel lost Gretal
he went to the store
bought some drumettes
began to explore...

Walked city streets
at a furious pace
an unbearable hunger
the drumettes he did taste...

Searching each pier
every one he explored
leaving a trail
of the bones, he ignored...

Mice disguised as men
scurried after his trail
now Gretal
are both, no more...

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Reviewed by Donna Maris 3/31/2004
lol twisted and irristable
I wonder if Hansel is like all men
exhibiting a one track mind?
:) Donna
Reviewed by andrea coltman 3/27/2004
Thought provoking twist..enjoyed wishes Andrea
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/26/2004
Chillingly thought-provoking, Zenith. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 3/24/2004
Zenith, looks like Mother Goose got cooked. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth 3/23/2004
lol. Life ain't glamourous in the big city. We have just as much talent in a small town. Good one, Z.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 3/23/2004
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick 3/23/2004
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 3/23/2004
A fairy "trail" updated for the 21st century, very appropriate and quite excellent, ~Z~. Peace thru Fantasy, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 3/22/2004
Satan Is Disquised Also As El Presidente Bush Even Your Best Friend-Do
Be Careful Who Smiles At You!


Reviewed by E. Richardson 3/22/2004
well done, Zenith...nicely done, dark twist on Mother Goose.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/22/2004
You did a great job on this twist;-)very graphic...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/22/2004
Clever write, Z! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/22/2004
Very nicly done Zenith!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by George Carroll 3/22/2004
Very nicely done
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/22/2004
This was great! Loved this modern fairy tale!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 3/22/2004
Nice fairy tale, Z.
Best regards,

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