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My heart is neutral
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Tuesday, March 23, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I
had
a dream.

In
my
dream.

I
was
the king.

And
she
my queen.

But
when I
opened my eyes.

I saw
her
with him.

The
king
of her dreams.

Lucky
she, and
unlucky me.

Yet,
I accept
this cruel reality.

My
heart,
is neutral.

When,
all love
is lost.

It
still
remains.

It
is like
the river.

It just
flows
on and on


Copyright 2004 Bhuwan Thapaliya


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Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) 3/31/2004
Bhuwan, this was simply exquisite. So unusual but exquisite
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 3/24/2004
wow neat piece B. this is a joy to read. I can relate with this. G
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 3/24/2004
I agree with bittersweet.....but wrought with such a unique and loving hand....... loved it ty, Dani
Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) 3/24/2004
Beautiful write Bhuwan, you are always the lover. Mikii
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/23/2004
bittersweet poem beautifully written, Bhuwan!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/23/2004
Masterful poetry Poet!!
Can feel the pain and bittersweetness of these
verses..................

Bravo HUGS~ LOVE ~ LUCK
Lady peg
Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader) 3/23/2004
Bhuwan,
Stunning poetry, it moved my very soul!

Beautifully composed!

Love, Sheila
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/23/2004
Just beautiful Bhuwan...loved the touching
heartfelt feel to this...and the art..floria
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/23/2004
Beautiful and heartfelt Bhuwan!!

Love & Hugs Tinka
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/23/2004
So beautifully written Bhuwan, and so moving, beautiful heart-felt poetry,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 3/23/2004
And keep it flowing, it's too pure to not.

Love
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Christine Morell 3/23/2004
Very meaningful, beautifully expressed Bhuwan
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/23/2004
Reality is sometimes not of what we want it to be;
but we all learn to live in it to cultivate our dreams. ~ Sandie Angel, March 23, 2004
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 3/23/2004
Ah, sometimes, it's toughest to awaken from the the most beautiful dreams. So full of emotion, this.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 3/23/2004
As does your wonderful talent for writing.
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 3/23/2004
"My heart is neutral" flows with the contents that deliver stimulating scents from the garden of the heart.

Happy Spring Season!

I salute You, Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 3/23/2004
Those dreams are no fun...so in this case we will hope that your dream doesn't come true! Good write Bhuwan. Lisa
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 3/23/2004
I can feel the sadness of the life in this poem....Masterful poem, Bhuwan!
Reviewed by Lori Moore 3/23/2004
and on and on... Sad, yet beauty filled.
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