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| Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader) |
4/3/2004 |
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| Very well done Bhuwan. So much in so little to so many |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
3/25/2004 |
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| Simply awe inspiring! |
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| Reviewed by Trixie Love |
3/24/2004 |
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Wow, Bhuwan,
Such a POWERFUL write...
Outstanding dear friend...
Trixie :) |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
3/24/2004 |
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tough truthful piece my good natured friend. It's hard for people like you and I to stomach this cruel world at times. I understand.
I have learned to stomach it and embrace the good. We have no choice. take care G |
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| Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) |
3/24/2004 |
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| powerful Bhuwan, Al |
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| Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader) |
3/24/2004 |
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So true Bhuwan and so powerfully said.
Well done
Andrea |
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| Reviewed by Rodney Bohen |
3/24/2004 |
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Bhuwan,
Powerful words!
Powerful pen!
I salute you sir.....
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
3/24/2004 |
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Amazing, you always have the truth on your fingertips.....So great to read you once more......and thank you for the most kind welcome back.
Dani x |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/24/2004 |
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an excellent write ...my friend
William |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
3/24/2004 |
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Love this Bhuwan....we do lose reality...
great write..floria |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/24/2004 |
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Beautifully expresssed, so true Bhuwan!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) |
3/24/2004 |
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| How sad ,hauntingly beautiful write and so true.You are proof that poets are the new world prophets. Much love Bhuwan..May we all meet one day upon the wind. Mikii |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/24/2004 |
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So true Bhuwan!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by ANTHONY KARIUKI (Reader) |
3/24/2004 |
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Human soul is darker than his hair,
His heart nerveless like the fingernails,
His mind full of sychophancy and jealousy,
His brain reckonless and
His person as selfish as fox.
Because he is suppressed by the cloud
Of revulsion.
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
3/23/2004 |
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| Interesting write. Very much enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/23/2004 |
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| Bhuwan, Another brilliant poem with a sad theme, but needed reminder of how little humanity truly cares of the important things... |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
3/23/2004 |
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art work made me think of an ink blot test...
hope we never loose the "lustrious existence". |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
3/23/2004 |
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| Very true........ |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/23/2004 |
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Bhuwan this is stellar and so beautiful.
a gem Poet.
LOVE N LUCK
Lady Peg |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/23/2004 |
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| so true! how humankind has forgotten the beauty that resides within us ... excellent poem, Bhuwan ... |
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