by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, March 24, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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This one is for Kate. :-)
i dip my pen into inspired ink
& write of dark thunderclouds in the skies--
dark clouds by lightning cauterized
lightning by thunder pulverized
thunder by the wind terrorized
& wind by rain is moisturized
the rain by hail is fossilized
& hail by updrafts maximized
updrafts by downdrafts brutalized
downdrafts by sirens advertized
it's coming! time for shelter, don't you think?
as i write tornadoes before your eyes--
(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman
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|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|Blimey ... and attack of the Z's LOL
Very creative write Karla
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
this was a creative idea, excellent write,,,
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|WOW Karla, what a great idea, and there you go again, writing more and more, and each and every time it just gets better and better...Peace, ed & rufuz|
|Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
|Wonderful poem, I love your creativity, Karla!
Do batten-down the hatches, and do stay safe!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very well done Karla!!
If I try to do creative work it remains a flop......lol!!
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
|batten down the hatches.....fill the thermos flask......you whipped us up here Karla. Very atmospheric poem, gave me a shiver down the backbone........hope you got plan B ready.....be safe, please.|
|Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
|I loved this Karla you captured it all so very very well,impressive read, well done...Mark x|
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Those of us who live in or near Tornado Alley need to prepare for the worst. Creative use of tilde. LOL And timely warning.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
I SEE it, I SEE it!! INCREDIBLE, stormy-filled poem, thanks a LOT!! (you know I HATE storms...) This is akin to an F-5 twister in creativity and rhyming! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twisted twin, Karen Lynn. :D LOL
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Hey Karla? Can you write up a small fortune? *grin* Joking ofcourse!
Yes I'd say it was time to take shelter! But...it is that time of the year! Good write Karla. Lisa