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set me free
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Wednesday, March 24, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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We must stop this horror NOW. GET OUT

held in place
by the hatred emitting like a death ray
from your eyes
i tremble
from fear (what will be my punishment today)

will your fists
batter me
into non-existance (will i be no more)
will i be
found broken
bleeding (murdered) my blood slickening the floor
don't hurt me

will your words
my soul from me (the essence of who i am)
will i be
a crippled
butterfly you can smash against the door jamb
set me free
will your feet
kick me out
like they've done before (when you're tired of me)
let me go
i beg you
the best thing you can do is to set me free
don't be slow

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) 3/28/2004
Painfully beautiful Karla. An excelleent write.Love your friend Mikii
Reviewed by jing javier 3/26/2004
hmm.. wish youd be freed.. miss you! =)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 3/25/2004
Excellent writing karla..
Your reahing the T0P!
Your friend
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 3/25/2004
Very potent write karla...fantastic!!!!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/25/2004
Extremely powerful write, Karla. Well done!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/25/2004
Very powerful poem Karla!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 3/25/2004
A powerful piece, about a painful subject, ty for giving a voice to those who arent in a position to give a voice for themselves...Powerful poetry...
God Bless
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 3/24/2004
WOW is all I can say, this is so POWERFUL & WELL WRITTEN, says so much about spousal and just plain girlfriend abuse...Justice thru Words, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/24/2004
Stark reality, excellent poem beautifully crafted Karla!
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 3/24/2004
Unfortunately, those who abuse never set anyone free until they go too far....

Powerful poem. {{{{{{{{{{{{{{{hug}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
Reviewed by Ashley Wilson 3/24/2004
This is a powerful poem, and is well written :). Good job :).
Reviewed by Lori Moore 3/24/2004
"will your words
my soul from me"

Wow... to me, that's a powerful phrase...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/24/2004

absolutely heartbreaking write with a powerful and important message; a needed write in today's society! may this madness of abuse end soon! thanks for sharing!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <
Reviewed by A PAX 3/24/2004
powerful words............
so direct and strong.......

hope all is well............

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