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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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set me free
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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--FICTION--

We must stop this horror NOW. GET OUT
BEFORE IT IS TOO LATE!!

fixated
held in place
by the hatred emitting like a death ray
from your eyes
i tremble
from fear (what will be my punishment today)
paralyzed

will your fists
batter me
into non-existance (will i be no more)
will i be
found broken
bleeding (murdered) my blood slickening the floor
don't hurt me

will your words
amputate
my soul from me (the essence of who i am)
will i be
a crippled
butterfly you can smash against the door jamb
set me free
 
will your feet
kick me out
like they've done before (when you're tired of me)
let me go
i beg you
the best thing you can do is to set me free
don't be slow

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)
Painfully beautiful Karla. An excelleent write.Love your friend Mikii
Reviewed by jing javier
hmm.. wish youd be freed.. miss you! =)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Excellent writing karla..
Your reahing the T0P!
Your friend
Ron
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Very potent write karla...fantastic!!!!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Extremely powerful write, Karla. Well done!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Very powerful poem Karla!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Karla,
A powerful piece, about a painful subject, ty for giving a voice to those who arent in a position to give a voice for themselves...Powerful poetry...
God Bless
~Michelle~
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
WOW is all I can say, this is so POWERFUL & WELL WRITTEN, says so much about spousal and just plain girlfriend abuse...Justice thru Words, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Stark reality, excellent poem beautifully crafted Karla!
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
Unfortunately, those who abuse never set anyone free until they go too far....

Powerful poem. {{{{{{{{{{{{{{{hug}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
Reviewed by Ashley Wilson
Wow...
This is a powerful poem, and is well written :). Good job :).
Reviewed by Lori Moore
"will your words
amputate
my soul from me"

Wow... to me, that's a powerful phrase...
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
(((Karla)))

absolutely heartbreaking write with a powerful and important message; a needed write in today's society! may this madness of abuse end soon! thanks for sharing!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( >tears <
Reviewed by A PAX
powerful words............
so direct and strong.......
whew!!!

hope all is well............
A
pax
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