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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
4/3/2004 |
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| Do you think they'll shoot the Easter Bunny? I did a poem on that once. I should post it here. :) |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
3/29/2004 |
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Great metaphor. Good form, and easy flow in this poem, get the point across. Good writing, Andrea.
Carmen :-) |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
3/28/2004 |
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oh my, and that just before Easter, Andrea!
poor rabbits...great write...
Gina |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
3/28/2004 |
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| Great picture - wonderful write! |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
3/27/2004 |
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Wonderful pic and poem!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~ |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
3/27/2004 |
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| You captured the feelings well in this poem Andrea. I guess most of us feel like a rabbit out in the open and unprotected sometimes in life, don't we? Bill |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
3/27/2004 |
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| Hitch hikers 42:)) most profound, just love the pic... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/27/2004 |
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| A cleverly expressed and wise lesson in verses, Andrea. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
3/27/2004 |
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| Very cleverly put, Excellent poem! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
3/27/2004 |
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| Real wisdom, unique write. |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
3/25/2004 |
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A ture grand lesson...
Thanks! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/25/2004 |
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Excellent metaphor Andrea and gets the point of
the rabbnit across also! Very creative write! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/25/2004 |
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Well done Andrea!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
3/25/2004 |
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This was so creative andrea...
well done....I really loved it..
great question....I wouldn't want to
be the poor rabit....nor the shooter...
so I am wondering where that would leave
me?...maybe I am the forest....made me
think here...loved this...floria |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/25/2004 |
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| Extremely interesting write, Andrea. Love that graphic! |
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| Reviewed by Magnus Rater (Reader) |
3/25/2004 |
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Only you could bring reality out of a darn rabbit! WOW! What an amazing and poignant submission!
Hey, who said that rabit stew was not tasty!!
Well done, Andrea, maybe we should organise a hunt to get 'dem' rabbit hunters! |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
3/25/2004 |
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"The Preconception" spreads the message and asks a question,
"You shoot to live or live to shoot". It flows in good harmony and sounds pleasantly.
I Salute, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
3/25/2004 |
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| One certainly has to learn to duck and dodge life's bullets. Good message here Andrea. Lisa |
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