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| Reviewed by Terri Tanner (Reader) |
4/27/2004 |
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| Thought this was going to be about a birthmark. Wondered how you were going to pull that one off!! I'm rooting for that little mole. Does he have a mole, by chance? |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
4/13/2004 |
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| Great example and Haiku! |
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
3/27/2004 |
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I enjoyed this haiku.
Nicely done.
john+ |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/27/2004 |
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| I love haiku. I love this muchly!!! Thank you for this offering, Pamela. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/26/2004 |
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| Nice message in this write, Pam! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart |
3/25/2004 |
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| When I was a kid, my Grandma woke my Dad at 3am to tell him there was a mole in the toilet. It somehow dug into the line and swam up to the bathroom toilet. My Dad simply got up and flushed it back down. Can you imagine finding a mole in your toilet right before you sit down at 3 in the morning? |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
3/25/2004 |
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| very nice write. I like the hidden meaning behind this... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/25/2004 |
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| Wonderful Haiku, Pamela. I am one who is fascinated by these tiny creatures. I watch them all the time poking up from the ground under my birdfeeder. Tiny, blind, yet filled with life! |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
3/25/2004 |
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I believe we could all learn alot from these creatures! We are too easily to give in..they never do!
You sure said alot in a very few words here Pamela! Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
3/25/2004 |
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| Ah, ha! A valuable lesson in this superb haiku. |
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