|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so beautiful, just a lovely and wonderful poem, I loved this:
I am an eternal phoenix
With my heart as old as the silver moon
That holds a melancholy tune in mute
Which I can hold still in my ears in moonlit nights
And a mind as young as a daffodil in young early spring
I can count colours into music
And music in colours poetry in hear beats
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Very creative...lovely lines in this poem..
great work here Munayem...floria
|Reviewed by Joyce Hale
|What a lovely write, Manuyem, that flows so fluidly and peacefully from your pen and your heart. It encompasses so much of life.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|creative images.......so very well done!|