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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/31/2004 |
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This was so beautiful, just a lovely and wonderful poem, I loved this:
I am an eternal phoenix
With my heart as old as the silver moon
That holds a melancholy tune in mute
Which I can hold still in my ears in moonlit nights
And a mind as young as a daffodil in young early spring
I can count colours into music
And music in colours poetry in hear beats
Outstanding poetry!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
3/26/2004 |
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Very creative...lovely lines in this poem..
great work here Munayem...floria |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Hale |
3/26/2004 |
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What a lovely write, Manuyem, that flows so fluidly and peacefully from your pen and your heart. It encompasses so much of life.
Peace. |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
3/26/2004 |
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| creative images.......so very well done! |
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