|Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
|Short albeit painfully true.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Powerful truth expressed here Ian! Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|money corrupts ... potent poem!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is just too powerful Ian!!
|Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
|could go into great depth with this one, but I shall stay in the shallows instead.......
kinda haunting, but thought provoking and bitter too..in fact I loved it!
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|One of the most powerful statements I have read today!
Great work, Ian.
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Ian, sometimes that's the only way one can get through the day! Just close your eyes and hope it's all over when you find the courage to open them again.
This is one powerful write! Lisa
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Oh Ian how powerful this is...
Brilliant......so much truth
in so few words....
by the way...thanks much for
the last note...I really appreciated
your words of wisdom and will take
your advice.....love to you...floria