|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|A humorous statement, but true.
Women with little ones want bigger ones,
No matter what,
I do so love "The Twins."
|Reviewed by Kalikiano Kalei
|Hilarious! A wonderful analysis of that aspect of femininity that captures us individuals of the XY genetic persiasion eternally and unreservedly! Your imagery equals your subject in clever reflective nuance! The hills are alive....with the sound of music and the promise of sensate adventure that more often than not defies absolutely any attempt to capture a sense of what it is that inspires males to pursue these twin, eternally comforting and fulfilling objects of imagined paradise! This is a wonderful exercise in expressive imagination! Thanks for more whimsical enjoyment than I have experienced in ages! I am tempted to say that your poem makes the 'breast of a complex experience', but I'll constrain myself from making that questionably amusing pun! (;-)
Aloha mai e, Kalikiano
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Well I stumbled here out of luck, and this is hilarious!
I waited until about 16 and started wondering when WHEN they were going to happen. Well, the bright side is I'll be perky to the end.
It's in the heart that matters. Maybe men are actually looking into the heart. I'll think positive.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|"Will someone please explain to me / This bizarre fascination with breasts?"
No, I will not explain the fascination. Just know that most men check "them" out long before they get to your other attributes, and eventually take a quick peek at your face before lingering back on those luscious boobies
|Reviewed by Jamie Gilcig
|It's all about the nipple :)|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i'm sure they are free at the right times ;)|
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|When guys write poems like this they get in trouble. I tell ya, if it ain't one thing it's an udder.|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Where, for god's sakes, have you been all my life?! LOL... This is simply marvelous.. as a humor poet, I must eagerly and gratefully tip my hat to this hilarious piece! As one who stands all of 5 feet tall and has "bazooms" the once turned corners from a block away (and are how heading for the knees.. lol) I am giggling madly here. (me sweetie thinks they're great fun.. the goofball). Listening to the girls in the locker room, as a teenager, complain about their nonexistent boobs, I wondered why I couldn't 'sell' some of mine to them... Sigh... ( always short of cash.. hehe). Ah well, I've rambled on here but just know that at least one reader/poet will chuckle long after I click away from this grand piece of hilarity! Well done! katy xox.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|This is too cute and adorable, Rhonda! Thanks for sharing; enjoyed this tribute to boobs!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D LOL