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breakthrough (for all my friends at AD)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Saturday, March 27, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Thank you, one and all, for your
prayers, love and encouragement.
You mean the world to me.

I love you all. :-)


spitting words & phrases
onto miles of pristine paper
& onto the world wide web
the poet thinks her words
will not be read

howling dejectedly
at a bitter full moon clouded by
doubtful feelings of self worth
the poet thinks her words
will not be read

beating her fists against
seemingly unpenatrable walls of
indignation & sadness
the poet suddenly
has a breakthrough

her words flow like rivers
encouraged by unselfish prayers &
the love from fellow authors
the poet is grateful
& so she writes

& her words are read

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader) 4/26/2004
I feel your words. Great work.
Reviewed by John Bidwell 3/28/2004
You are essential!
So there.
Wonderful writing Karla.
John
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader) 3/28/2004
Well I for one, always seek out your name when I get time to spend on AD and this is yet another winner, thanks Karla
Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/28/2004
Thanks Karla
for always sharing your wonderful
thoughts

William
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 3/28/2004
This has a fresh, new kinda feel, though expressed by others at times, this one 'sits up and gives notice'... Karla, you are always worth reading because your words come straight out of your heart and your gut! That's what makes it a guaranteed 'day-changer'... Carry on.. oh, where are my manners: YOU'RE WELCOME! LOL. katy xox.
Reviewed by jude forese 3/27/2004
a wonderful poem, read by many ...
Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader) 3/27/2004
Oh, this is beautiful, Karla!

A most excellent write...
And you are a beautiful poet!

Love, Sheila
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 3/27/2004
As long as I keep paying my ISP I will read you
Texan poets are just as good as any poet
Your friend
Lurve ya......Ron
Reviewed by Jack Roberts 3/27/2004
I like this Karla! Very much! : )

Jack
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/27/2004
Wonderful to see you in an up mood again, Karla!;-)
Another superb write!
Reviewed by Rose L 3/27/2004
Karla,

So it would seem that both poet and muse needed some words to soothe what ails....glad we both got them in abundance.

~Rose~
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart 3/27/2004
Not only read, but heard loud and clear. Inspiration is such a wonderful feeling.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/27/2004
Brava love flows beautifuly.,

Always prayers.

Peggy
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/27/2004
Your love flows like a river in this wonderful write, Karla. So very well done!
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ 3/27/2004
Wonderful work Karla. God Bless You. Be well.

~Joseph
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 3/27/2004
Wonderful write Karla, I am glad I have the pleasure of reading your words...
God Bless
~Michelle~
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/27/2004
Wonderful indeed Karla! It is always a pleasure to read your work.

Sorry I've been away a lot lately. Since my Dad has passed away, I'm staying a three days and two nights at my mom's place every week so she will not think that she's alone.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 3/27/2004
To miss reading a poem of my friend Karla, is tantamount to missing the air I breath, hard to give up, hard to live without...Peace thru Friendships, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/27/2004
This was so strong Karla, I am so glad you are feeling a bit better,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader) 3/27/2004
What a difference a day makes! Keep thinking positive and keep writing. Love ya, Susan
Reviewed by Vicky Jeter 3/27/2004
Karla
"beating her fists against seemingly unpenatrable walls . . ."
No doubt the epitome to The Writer doing battle with The Writer's Block. This is classic. Love Vicky
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 3/27/2004
As long as you draw pen to paper, there will always be someone to read your writings, whatever mood they are created in.

{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{hug}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/27/2004
Yes this is so true......thanks for sharing your words Karla!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by john zimmerman 3/27/2004
kara,
I was just coming to look for you when I found your your latest at the very top of the new poetry page. I'm so glad that you have snapped out of it, whenever it was. We are told that writing is nine parts preparation and one part inspiration. That's true but another part writing is believing in yourself and your work.

Speaking of work this piece is a good one .

love

john+
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/27/2004
Love ya Karla....your writing is always
appreciated and read by me....you touch
my heart many times..glad you are feeling
better....we all get down from time to time..
it's called life....lol...love ya...floria
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/27/2004
(((Karla)))

so glad you are inspired! see what a little support (and prayer!) can do??? don't beat yourself up, honey; we ALL have those moments of self-doubt and despair; Lord knows I do! Keep up the great job, and may your pen NEVER run out of ink, and may your muse ALWAYS be active!

Wonderful write that shows your creativity and thanks; very well done! BRAVA! Enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

(((MORE HUGS))) (just because I love you...)
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 3/27/2004
Will always read the words from your beautiful heart, Karla.
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) 3/27/2004
You bet they are, hon!
Keep up the good work.
*Hugs*
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