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my first haiku
by Katy L Walsvik

Sunday, March 28, 2004
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These are my very first haiku... my great friend Daniel McTaggart told me they should be about nature.. I think that's lovely.

I

petals drifting down
no longer whole, in pieces
scatter to the wind

II

little snail crawling
you have no interest in
the smile you gave me

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Reviewed by A PAX 4/8/2004
neat!!! I did my first one yesterday.........its not all that tuff........

I love yours..........lol.......snails!!!
i smiled too!!!
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney 4/4/2004
I do like these ever so much, i'd never attempt something like this though it dont stop me being curious about them, for what i know here and my knowledge is limited,i think you done a pretty decent job on these, well done Katy,another string for your bow me sweet, take care...Mark xx
Reviewed by Londis Carpenter 3/30/2004
Wondermous
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart 3/29/2004
Katy, I think you've tapped an unlimited well of potential here. These are absolutely beautiful! They most excellently capture what haiku is really about. More please!
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 3/28/2004
Oooh, Katy! These are wonderful! I love your smile... :)
Reviewed by Dan Summerfield (Reader) 3/28/2004
first is always best

whatever the season is

congratulations

Dan S.
Reviewed by Franz Kessler 3/28/2004
Yes, I like them. Franz
Reviewed by jude forese 3/28/2004
these are excellent!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/28/2004
Once you've done a Haiku,
There is no stopping you,
And these are pretty good!

But I think that snail is smiling back!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/28/2004
They are great but I like the snail one best...
I love these and must try them...in the past
I have tried and dont do them well...
well done katy...floria
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/28/2004
Brava! you did two superb Haiku, now
there's no stopping you;-)!More! more!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 3/28/2004
ah..these were wonderful! I loved them!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 3/28/2004
Wonderful, Katy. And it is about time, if you can get me to writing limericks, the least you could do is give us these gems.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/28/2004
(((katy)))

lovely 'ku, (((YOU)))! enjoyed

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Reviewed by George Carroll 3/28/2004
A budding haikuist
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/28/2004
NOT BAD at all, Katy; you did a fine job for your first time! Haikus are fun, and I love doing them (when I write poetry, that is!)!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
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