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The Sister's Grim
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Sunday, March 28, 2004
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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* Some fun from the "Grim Sisters..."

The Sister's Grim

Ah how we smile,
When we see them,
Laugh even,
These pathetic creatures,
Crawling in the dark,
Fawning and lapping at our feet...
She calls me and giggles,
"Oh Queen of Darkness,
Shall we rule this hell together then?"
I laugh insidiously,
"Why not,
I've nothing better to do..."
Shall we terrorize them;
Make them whimper in the night?
There is nothing better than to see a man,
Quiver in terror beneath the light!
Come sister,
Soul the color of pitch,
Let us brew us a batch of earthly delight,
Offer it to those who seek our sight,
Watch them drink with too much greed,
And then whine about not paying heed,
To the warning their mother gave them so long ago!
Let us pat those sniveling heads,
Smile and show them the grave,
They so willingly dug!
Light your black candles,
and perform your spells,
remind them why life is hell!
Wind them around your fingertips;
Mold them to your black heart like clay!
Show them why the fear us today!
They stand and shiver in the cold,
while we stand before you so bold!
Whispering among yourselves in fear,
how dull your mind is!
How dim!
Look you now and see before you,
The Sisters Grim!

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Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 4/6/2004
What imagery!!! is it October already?
Reviewed by William Bonilla 3/31/2004
very creative imagination
love it

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang 3/31/2004
You wicked thing you!
What ghastly writing!
My kind of thing in some weird way!
Excellent poem! Brilliant!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 3/31/2004
Reindeer....superb write of dark n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 3/30/2004
Reminds me of MacBeth's witches!
Great write!!!
Reviewed by David Anthony 3/30/2004
This one sparks the dark imagination.
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 3/29/2004
Whoooh! This is dark and wicked.

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney 3/29/2004
Are all sisters so grim??? grim people couldn't write this they wouldn't want to share this, un-grim people are different they see many sides, this author is one of them folk, un - grim with a vision of all sides...well done...Mark x
Reviewed by Heather White 3/29/2004
oh queen of darkness, awsome write about us, just loved it
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/29/2004
Wonderful and awesome poetry, Reindeer; and the pic is spectacular!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 3/29/2004
Wonderful, excellent write. Enjoyed.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 3/29/2004
This is great Retta!!

You made me feel like a little demon reading this!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 3/29/2004
You've captured my secret daydream. It's called getting even and oh... how sweet it is. Well done, Reindeer.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley 3/28/2004
a good write..Floreann
Reviewed by Franz Kessler 3/28/2004
Interesting reflection on diabolic joy and suffering. Franz
Reviewed by Vicky Jeter 3/28/2004
Shades of the three witches of McBeth.
Always appreciate you work, and your comments.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 3/28/2004
I love this one reindeer it is fantastic.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed 3/28/2004
For such Bad Bad Girls, your pictures look - angelic!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 3/28/2004
Oh I really enjoyed this Reindeer...
love the picture too...floria
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/28/2004
I like this a lot Reindeer! Oh to have a day like that
just once;-)LOL!
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 3/28/2004
>>>Let us brew us a batch of earthly delight
< < < Way to go, Retta! BRILLIANT!
Reviewed by George Carroll 3/28/2004
Dark and dainty
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) 3/28/2004
This is so nice to read and so excellent .


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