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unlimited potential
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Monday, March 29, 2004
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in the endless ocean of words
i am but one miniscule drop
of water
one tiny particle
in the middle of a tsunami
i fight the current
and flow off on my own
and my words become rivers

in endless atmospheres of words
i am but one small molecule
of air
one tiny atom
inhaled by a muse
i am encouraged to breathe
i slowly exhale
and my words become poems

in endless storms of falling words
i am but a flickering bolt
of lightning
one brief flash
amid stunning brilliance
i fight to last
to live longer than a moment
and my words echo like thunder

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman.

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Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)	4/3/2004

That's a remarkable write. You used metaphors that would never have occurred to me. Wonderful




Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen	3/29/2004

Karla: One person has the power to change the world... God Bless ~Michelle~




Reviewed by Ed Matlack	3/29/2004

Karla, each time you write, you strengthen your perfection, someday to the point beyond all the rest of us...each time you get better & better, Peace thru Self-Knowledge, Ed & Rufuz




Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)	3/29/2004

Karla, Karla your potential is indeed unlimited as so eloquently written. < < < < < < < < <HUGS>>>>>>>>Mikii




Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)	3/29/2004

One brief but very brilliant flash....just beautiful!! Andrea




Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)	3/29/2004

Not only do your words echo, but also reverberate throughout the stratosphere of this Den. As Karen said, Brava, brava! for this powerful write. {{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	3/29/2004

(((Karla))) Your words do speak, and many hear them in the way you present your poems! Powerful, outstanding poetry; you have really come a long way in your writing skills! Keep up the great work, and maybe one day we will be seeing your name in the winner's circle here for the poetry contest! You DESERVE to win, in my honest opinion!! You are a poet to be reckoned with, and your poetry does teach, touch, and inspire many (most of all, ME!)! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D




Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)	3/29/2004

They sure do echo like thunder... ROARING THUNDER....as they speak out to us all Karla...great writing again from you...blessings to you...floria

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