|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This one is solomon it is
dark and deep. Can feel the
|Reviewed by anne cunningham
|don't delete. i agree with eileen, you hit the despondency nail right on the head, so change this to ... "successful morbid attempt!"|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|This is NOT as trashy as you think it is, graham...the writing and meter are impeccable, and i think you did a very good job with this!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|I have written many things I thought were trash. Only to look at them years later and realize they were quite interesting. As my frame of mind has changed, so has my perception of past works. You may think this poem is trash now. But look at it later and see if you can realize a particular flow you were not capable of before. Despite the despondent tone of this, it flows beautifully.|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|I like morbid.....lol
Well I don't like it, I think It makes for some great poetry......I enjoyed this Graham.
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Yes, and usually ended up deleting it, but thats just me. As for this write, hmmmm, no, i dont believe you. Your not a morbid person, you must of just forgotten the happy pills for the day. :)
Not convinced hehe.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I found it quite despondent, which is what
you intended, so I guess it's a successful
|Reviewed by Jane Rodway
|lol- I think this is an interesting attempt at morbid:)|