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| Reviewed by Amira van Kerk |
7/20/2004 |
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Well, but these are just the pleasant and positive repetitions, though surely boring.
Unfortunately the negative things also happen again and again...
Great poem. |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
4/9/2004 |
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You write in a most unique way.
Clever, witty, work....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
4/6/2004 |
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| this is sharply funny....good work, Franz |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
4/4/2004 |
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Reality speaks! Heeeheee!
~ May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel ~ |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
4/4/2004 |
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i enjoyed this a lot! Very well done.
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
4/4/2004 |
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ugh...yeah..that's it in a nutshell!!!!...hmmm..perhaps next time 'round we can create a less boring scenario..Perhaps!!!!
Enjoyed this ..thanks!
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/4/2004 |
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| You paint a portrait of reality and the catch is in realizing how I can relate to a lot of it. Thank you for this offering, Franz. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
4/3/2004 |
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lol
bravo! |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
4/3/2004 |
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| Well for sure Franz, one of the things has lost its boredom due to the price increase! (Filling up our gasoline tanks). Wish it would become boring again. Good poem. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
4/1/2004 |
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Heh heh heh...great verses...I love the starbucks one
and walmarts the best..but they are all great...
creative writing Franz....floria |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
4/1/2004 |
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| Must be the Starbucks. |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
4/1/2004 |
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Moment to moment we build our day. Sometimes it's exiting, sometimes mundane. Well done.
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
3/31/2004 |
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| Very well crafted and creative Franz! |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
3/31/2004 |
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This was so creative and uniquely written, I loved this!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/31/2004 |
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kOOL WRITE fRANZ
VERY CREATIVE, I LIKE IT
WILLIAM |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/31/2004 |
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i like how you've arranged these glimpses of daily episode ...
sometimes the mundane will keep you sane ... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/31/2004 |
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| Funny stuff, yet sad, too, in our modern, much too harried world. |
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| Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart |
3/31/2004 |
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| I like the way you capture mundanity here. Maybe it is blah, but it's comfortable blah. It also makes me think repetition isn't such a bad way to live sometimes. But it's up to us to change routine every once in a while. Once done, we can feel better about all that repetition. |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
3/31/2004 |
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Acurate description of the every day blahs we endure. Need some fun, don't we?
Gina |
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