|Reviewed by Mocha Sistah
|Awesome, Real and beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by * Twilah
|Heart-rendering poetry. I am in awe of your poetry.
|Reviewed by Mark Carroll
|Wow. I love the thought of pleading for anothers entry to heaven.
I am glad you have given yourself permission to let go of your pain and this (the Female Portion) is like a declaration that you chose to be free of the pain residing in the past and not let it affect your future. All at the inspiration and challenge of others.
Take the love of all those who have viewed your work as vote of confidence you are a grand poet, and a lovely person.
Choose to have a powerful tommorrow,
|Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
|How can anyone forget someone who writes such beautiful words as these ?|
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Very sad but beautiful too.
A great write!
Thanks for the review too!
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|I love the emotion. Beautifully sad.|
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|You must know from the comments of your peers that you will be remembered...great write...best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|So heartfelt and a wonderful piece.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh This is beautiful Retta!!
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|I Will Remember You By The Compassion You Wrote In To Your Poetry!
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Retta, a deeply moving write. Done with such gentleness.|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Sad, yet beautiful. Excellent Retta.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Reindeer this is so sad...so beautiful...
so many heartfelt lines here...just loved it..
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|This is so beautiful, Reindeer! I love the flow in this poem...|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Always a pleasure to read something by you.|
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Sometimes our wishes are not realized. And so we go on. Sad. Good poem, Reindeer.
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|yes, Retta, Robert did say it so well...
and moving, oh yes and how so gently exploring what pains us, so much...
beautifully done, amen...
much here so many will see and know and feel with ...
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I agree with Robert
and also, thanks always for your reviews Retta..
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a beautifully written, moving poem that reveals how love can be so one-sided sometimes ...|
|Reviewed by Franz Kessler
|Write full of deep, loving emotion and longing. Can we feed on spice without food? Perhaps love is only a spice. Franz|
|Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa
|This is a fantastic piece, right from the heart. I enjoyed it.|
|Reviewed by Jack Roberts
|How could anyone forget your Reindeer? This is Wondeful!
|Reviewed by anne cunningham
|well you transformed the grief of love-lost into something for all of us to take note of. a lovely, bittersweet write.|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|an outstanding write ...Reindeer
|Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
|Ah! The aftermath ... and it's so good to see the yearning without the condemnation.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|lovely. tinged with sorrow to be sure but so moving.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A mesmerizing write, Reindeer, and one worth remembering for sure.|