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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
4/9/2004 |
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Amazing Brittany!
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
4/8/2004 |
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Excellent as always...
God Bless
~Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Jeff Mason |
4/8/2004 |
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| Oh SO incredibly beautiful! PLEASE, give us more of this type of depth of passion and incredible warmth! THIS is why I continue to have intense confidence and pride in you. Brava! -- Jeff |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
4/6/2004 |
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| Wow so good Brit, I really enjoyed this. You're a sunrise coming! your work is marvelous. l&p G |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
4/6/2004 |
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Wow, Brittany, this is great!! Love this opening verse:
"if i can feel your breath
massaging every nerve
if i can feel your fingers
still drawing to my curves,"
Very soothing in its gentle sensuality. :) |
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| Reviewed by Craig Bateman (Reader) |
4/5/2004 |
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Nicely Done Brittany,
Long time no speak. It is good to see your poetry again. "Blooms into fear" is very nice. And the last line is nice as well. The poem is nicely accessible for me.
Peace to you. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/5/2004 |
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| a passionate separation of love's assurances ... |
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| Reviewed by Frank Stein (Reader) |
4/5/2004 |
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| Brittany, I don't get to comment as much as I'd like, but your poetry is wonderful, and I enjoy it regularly. This poem is to me, a song about passion, it's build up , it's bliss... very nice.. Jim |
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