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Into Alone
by Brittany Renée
Monday, April 05, 2004
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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DISCLAIMER: This poem is intended for entertainment use only and resembles no part of the author's life.

if i can feel your breath
massaging every nerve
if i can feel your fingers
still drawing to my curves,
i know that this is honest
i know you're intentions
but baby, if i get hooked
what will happen then?
finding wounds in dark places
but you go on healing.
all the shyness subsides for now
as we continue revealing.
minding to our desires
delving into  consequence
my mind slips back to the start;
what was the pretense?
deep within there is a quake
and i feel soon erruption.
with every taste of your laughter
this desire will keep resumption.
a canopy of privacy
one, to know, i've never come
all i know is we're alone.
all we can do is run.
i can feel your warmth
wanting to come near.
i can feel the tension,
that blooms into fear.
i can feel the unsureness
as we enter our zone.
i can feel the relief we go into 'alone'.

Copyright Brittany Renée 2004
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Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 4/9/2004
Amazing Brittany!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 4/8/2004
Excellent as always...
God Bless
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 4/8/2004
Oh SO incredibly beautiful! PLEASE, give us more of this type of depth of passion and incredible warmth! THIS is why I continue to have intense confidence and pride in you. Brava! -- Jeff
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 4/6/2004
Wow so good Brit, I really enjoyed this. You're a sunrise coming! your work is marvelous. l&p G
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 4/6/2004
Wow, Brittany, this is great!! Love this opening verse:

"if i can feel your breath
massaging every nerve
if i can feel your fingers
still drawing to my curves,"

Very soothing in its gentle sensuality. :)
Reviewed by Craig Bateman (Reader) 4/5/2004
Nicely Done Brittany,

Long time no speak. It is good to see your poetry again. "Blooms into fear" is very nice. And the last line is nice as well. The poem is nicely accessible for me.

Peace to you.
Reviewed by jude forese 4/5/2004
a passionate separation of love's assurances ...
Reviewed by Frank Stein (Reader) 4/5/2004
Brittany, I don't get to comment as much as I'd like, but your poetry is wonderful, and I enjoy it regularly. This poem is to me, a song about passion, it's build up , it's bliss... very nice.. Jim

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