by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Tuesday, April 06, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Days almost over,
penned kind of mean.
In real life,
didn't make the same mistake.
Nice to everyone,
even the foolish.
Knew I was a little off,
wanted to be on.
Smacked myself too,
no mean mistakes through.
Should have broke my pen,
before I hit the den.
No regrets really,
just feel a little silly.
Looking in the mirror,
other me was there.
I knew it,
still almost blew it.
Words are like birds,
maybe bad ones will fly.
Go back to the cage,
get off my page.
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|Reviewed by Lynn Barry
|Writing on a bad day is as benefial as writing on a good day...your style keeps changing...evolving...you are quite gifted...very nice...|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|It's really hard to stay on an even keel in this
life Grady....cut yourself some slack..you deserve it.
I am Italian and can have a bit of a temper when I
want to....I try to keep the lid on...people like me
more that way...LOL...take care...floria
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|have a bad day, grady? i hope not; if you did, i hope things get better for you! we ALL have those mean days!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
good write that expresses your anger. let it out, okay?? it'll do you good!