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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
4/11/2004 |
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| Reaches deep Erica. |
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
4/11/2004 |
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She may, indeed, be "Born into this shadow of death... Born into pain...", but she need not remain there. She IS worthy. A most painful write - one that I understand all too clearly. Blessed Be.
A thousand hugs,
Tami
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
4/11/2004 |
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| Erica, I really like the emotion you write with here and the form you chose. Hope to all the angels in disguise out there, and a Happy Easter to you. Dawn |
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
4/11/2004 |
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ah, the evil we do to the "least of these..."
powerful write
john+ |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/11/2004 |
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| An honest but sad write.Hope you find better days that will dispel the despair in your life. Happy Easter, may the good Lord enter your life and replace the emptiness within. |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
4/11/2004 |
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been there baby! it ain't fun!!!
You did a good job portraying this angst! |
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| Reviewed by James Justice |
4/11/2004 |
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| This is great unfortunately there are so many people in this world that feel that type of dispair and isolate them selves from the world. Wonderful write |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/11/2004 |
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| There's always hope, sounds like a plea and gentle rant.. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
4/11/2004 |
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I think I had read this poem before. I liked this then, and I still like it now. "Angel In Disguise" is a work of art.
Happy Easter to you!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
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