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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
4/14/2004 |
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| A finely written poem of the most eloquent order! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/14/2004 |
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| Oh my, what a wimp this has brought tears to my eyes, so heart rending...Good luck, and you will never forget, for the first time in my life I understand the words better to have loved and lost than not have loved at all..take care....x |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
4/12/2004 |
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| Oh Rene.....how uttery heartbreaking...I'm sorry for your loss.....your poem is very well written....great rhyme.....and flow..Do get that book done for your Sons....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
4/12/2004 |
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Oh Rene..How I relate to this...
I can feel your sorrow...it is so very
difficult...I still have my sons jacket,
shoes, pants, shirt, etc that he had on
when the ambulance took him away...they
are still hanging in my closet...I just
can't seem to do something with them...
it's as if I am afraid to let go...this
is wonderful writing from your heart...
I hope that writing helps you heal...it does
help but the pain never goes away...bless you..
floria |
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