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|Reviewed by Brandon Petit
|The flow here is excellent. I especially like the last four lines, not juts because of the rhyme but because of the meaning in that part. "whilst you mock the cat... and later, must beg".... I like the old-school language, using words such as "whilst". this gives the poem a very professional and classical feel. keep up the good work!