|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
So beautifully written, and very heartwrenching. I suppose we all have to an extent a "Picture of Days"
ps. I guess she did ask for the hamburger lol :)
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|I did live those days, thank goodness. But I couldn't have expressed it like you did. Wonderful pictures and smells fill up my mind and leave me longing to once again, spend a day there. Thank you for a beautiful poem.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Excellent poem ....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Puts me back in time, to happiness, and melting moments baking in the oven.
Beautiful write Rose TY :)
|Reviewed by Graham Donnachaidh
|MP....i cannot better anything that has been said about this piece..just one thing..
"my grandmother who baked pillow-soft biscuits'....
Is that not the sweetest declaration of luve ...that I've ever read..?
a master you are my friend....you put emotions into simple words....staggering..
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|This is one of the most beautiful, most uniquely phrased
"nostalgia" pieces I believe I have ever read!
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|"her softshelled face..." <--- THAT'S one of the many reasons for reading your poetry.. when the words and the phrasing paint pictures that nestle in the heart and mind, long after the reading ends, THAT'S poetry at its finest.. there's an ache here, yet such a willingness to travel back, to 'listen' and 'taste'.. to 'hear' and really 'feel' what you've said in this. I cannot quite adequately express the stunned feeling I had when I glanced up and realized I had truly gone back with you.. quite left the room. What a marvelous poet, inviting person you are. This will linger, happily so. katy xox.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Captivating verses Mountain Poet. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Really enjoyed reading this Mt Poet...
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Love the last stanza excellent poem.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A grand picture, filled with bittersweet memories. Enjoyed very much.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|There is a freshness and innocence of our first kiss and the smell of windblown clothes on a line. These are images which, once seen and done, are forever etched within our thoughts. You brought out the smells and tastes quite vividly with this fine poem.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful down memory lane write M!!
|Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
|A truly special and beautifully written recollection of bittersweet memories....brought back some "pictures" from my album of the past too....and for that, I thank you.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was just beautiful, lovely,
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|WONDERFULLY well-written - sublime imagery and emotion! -- Jeff|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|we should always keep our nostalgia up to date ...
very well crafted poem ...
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Exquisite, Poet! Swooningly poignant, could-have-beens are so human. :)|
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Wistful nostalgia...vivid images.
Looking back is bitter-sweet.