by Ronald W. Hull
Sunday, April 18, 2004
Rated "R" by the Author.
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I don't know what put me up to this, ... the need to be free? ;-)
Fred Trilingual wangle dangle,
Fishing for a pond.
Mona Minya stepped on a pina,
Coladaing for a cocoanut frond.
Janet Jackson caught the action,
Waving her magic wand.
Action Jackson in deep traction,
Mass destruction weapons pond.
Hairy Rising quite surprising,
Looking for his toad.
Bush Bashing donkey hashing,
He hit the road.
Bunker Buster thrust his trustor,
His seed was sowed.
Raster Rocket hit the pocket,
Lost his full load.
Temperance Tony prays a mighty,
It is he, I goad.
Copyright 2004 © Ronald W. Hull
Photo: Mathesen Lake Swimming Hole, B.C.
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|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|lol a twung twister......Really enjoyed this....ty, Dani ;)|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
|Hahaha This is really good, Ron!
Most creative and amusing, wonderful write!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Interesting write and thoughts!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|hehehehhe.....this is so funny...I like you silly side!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent rhythm ...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|LOL! Whatever the cause, it turned out great, very
witty made me chuckle!thanks Ronald!;-)
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Ha! Ronald, m'dearie, if you smoosh your face up to the monitor and open your eyes reeeeeeal big, maybe you will see the huge grin on my face! Word play deluxe, I'd say... how delightful and airy and fun! This will be my treat for the evening.. this is a dandy! katy xox.|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|I agree with Evelyn...this is a "jazzy" piece of writing!!!|
|Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
|Reads like jazz.|