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| Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick |
6/1/2004 |
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| stunning |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/22/2004 |
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safety is a wonderful thing but if we live too long with its domain, it can become obsolete and leave us without motivation ...
excellent positive poetry ... |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
4/21/2004 |
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| Susan...such a beautiful write...am lost inside the beauty of your verses my dear friend...clap clap clap....soothing write....love n luck....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/19/2004 |
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(((susan)))
this is so beautiful and serene--i love seeing your happy place :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Marco Landi |
4/19/2004 |
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Inside ... there is a haven where you dwell ...
Beautiful Susan...we should all discover that part inside....
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
4/19/2004 |
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| Finding the beauty is a safe place this is excellent Susan~~~ |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/19/2004 |
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Very beautiful poem Susan!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
4/19/2004 |
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Susan...the poem and the picture are beautiful and meaningful to me.
That "core" where our deepest reveries are stored, is priceless.
You portrayed it well, although I would suggest eliminating the last
2 words of the poem, as they seem superfluous, and must have meaning
only for the reader who is 'the other half.' |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
4/19/2004 |
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a beautiful piece ...Susan
enjoyed
William |
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