|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|Reviewed by jude forese
|safety is a wonderful thing but if we live too long with its domain, it can become obsolete and leave us without motivation ...
excellent positive poetry ...
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Susan...such a beautiful write...am lost inside the beauty of your verses my dear friend...clap clap clap....soothing write....love n luck....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
this is so beautiful and serene--i love seeing your happy place :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Marco Landi
|Inside ... there is a haven where you dwell ...
Beautiful Susan...we should all discover that part inside....
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Finding the beauty is a safe place this is excellent Susan~~~|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very beautiful poem Susan!!
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Susan...the poem and the picture are beautiful and meaningful to me.
That "core" where our deepest reveries are stored, is priceless.
You portrayed it well, although I would suggest eliminating the last
2 words of the poem, as they seem superfluous, and must have meaning
only for the reader who is 'the other half.'
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|a beautiful piece ...Susan