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first thought, defensive
intriguing though it may be
second thought, really?
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or, offensive lead
interesting state of facts
concepts and beliefs
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to tarry within
spirals within the thunder
floating in the sky
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to be different
has nothing to do with same
gist of meaningful
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/21/2004 |
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Very good Debby!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
4/20/2004 |
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| Love the flow of thought! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/20/2004 |
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| well-developed haiku ... |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
4/19/2004 |
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| well done! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/19/2004 |
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| Always be different. Love 'em all... |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
4/19/2004 |
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| Soaringly good! Much enjoyed. |
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