|Reviewed by Tactfully Naive
|Then saw his form by windowsill
Still as statues, shocked at first
Dazed and mute, their eyes conversed
Questions booming in their minds
Without a sound...thoughts intertwined
I've had this kind of experience, though darker than this interaction. Imagine a ghost forgetting his own name? Huh, put's a different slant on not being able to spell one's own name.
The plot continues.
|Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
|Hauntingly alluring. Just gone through three.
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|so haunting and very creative Lady A.|
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|Fantastic write...best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Ahhhh, romantic overtures across The Great Divide! I am fascinated: is HE wanting to "come back" or is it her astral travelling that is bringing him into such close proximity such that there is connection between them?! To be continued...you've got me!! KB|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
this is enchanting, creative, and brilliantly composed. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love the play of thoughts and words. Since I am on the road I might miss a part of this on going series, could you send me a message when you add on to this?|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|I want to read the rest this is so creative and well written.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Well now, this is awesome Lady A
Thanks for stopping my way....
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Seems you have us all hooked Lady A! ;-)
A splendid mesmerizinbg series!
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Fantastic write...I am eagerly looking for the next installment.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent story/poem Anita!!
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|WOW cant wait for the next part.....
he seems like a friendly ghost anyway...
great enjoyable read Anita..floria
|Reviewed by Robert Montesino
|You got great story/poem going here...looking forward to the rest!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Even more intriguing! Love your quotes in this eerie series, too!|