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Merion Square.
by Oisín Breen
Thursday, April 22, 2004
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This daze is recollected through the midsummer blues.
Nowhere’s imagination seeds my own being.
I am mesmerised under shooting stars by my deeds.
Every path diverges on the sands of experience.

I dreamed on a carpet of clay.
I bayed at my own visionary way.
Brought through recollection to last autumn by a pond.
I remembered the stars.
I was with a woman and we fell asleep in our arms.

From the big blue the sun fell and she and I escaped to a rickety old boat.
We rowed to sea dodging a falling inferno.
One half of the sun split off from the other and sailed away downstream chasing two daffodils in a rowing boat.

Our rowing boat grew wings.
We sailed away and blew ourselves right up into space.
Our boat was a spaceship surrounded on all sides by many more.

Six hundred with mad ideas about ecology and biology and phantasy flames set sail like lunatics with radical ways.
We landed on this green and red planet.
It was like the phantom of my dreams.
I’ve dreamt for fifteen years.

We landed on the grassy green earth and set to work on building.
Today I am sitting on a porch recollecting my own haze.
I asked a girl out and the sun fell down.
We built everything here to look like flowers, that was my idea one day during the rain season showers.

I return to the hearth of soil and ash in another world.

Copyright © 2004 Oisín Breen. No reprints or distribution of any kind sort in any form in this or any other known universe or dimension or medium without my express permission.

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Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 4/24/2004
BRILLIANT use of imagery as a potent tool...you have too many tricks in your toolkit, Poet...enlighten us...

Debashish
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 4/24/2004
So good to read you again, Oisin.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 4/23/2004
Magnificent imagery Oisin!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 4/22/2004
I haven't see Merion Square but your poem reminds me of After the Goldrush.
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 4/22/2004
What a wonderful journey you've allowed me, thanks. (especially like the second verse) Keep dreaming, Oisin.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/22/2004
Love the second verse Oisin! Great poetic journey!
Reviewed by jude forese 4/22/2004
a wonderful excursion through imagination and its potential ...
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 4/22/2004
Oisin your imagery here is magnificent...
just lovely lines and a wonderful dream...
the realization in the last line is awesome..
great work...floria
Reviewed by A PAX 4/22/2004
Very cool.........you took me on a voyage........ty
pax
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