|Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
|Great imagery Terri.....very nice!|
|Reviewed by Graham Donnachaidh
|luve the morn-night image...tacky breath of a heavy hangover..
my sort of poem..
been there on numerous voyages..
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|No wonder you can't sleep. all that spinning and weaving and frolicking. Run 'em off and take a stiff drink of something with an alcohol content. Sleep. Just kidding here. I liked your wordplay, it was really fasinating in such a short poem. Very well done.|
|Reviewed by Terri Tanner (Reader)
|Thanks to you both. Now if I could just get some sleep!!|