You are 4235 miles (6816 km) (3680 nautical miles)
Itís night there and here.
Weíve already kissed goodnight
in our special way.
I can sense youíve drifted off to sleep,
where the two of us are walking hand in hand,
in your nightly dreams.
I know this, because
you are right now in my day dreams.
With my eyes open, I look out into space.
Seeing you halfway under the covers
I run my hand down your back,
feeling the softness of your skin.
Your warmth radiates up towards me
as I slide in by your side.
Resting my face on your shoulder,
I breath in deeply, just loving your scent;
parfum de l'homme.
Your breaths are slow and gentle.
All your muscles relaxed, at ease.
I pull in closer for a sleepy embrace
when the dog jumps up on the bed,
worming his way between us.
Smiling now, I can see it all
as Iím sipping tea on the sofa,
4235 miles away.
Copyright © 2004 Sara Coslett
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|Reviewed by peter paton (Reader)
|This is so romantic and sensual , it tugs at your heartstrings !
We need a lot more of this message in the world !
|Reviewed by Franz Kessler
|Interesting, mindful write. Although humans are often spiritually connected in dream or thought, we still miss each other. Franz|
|Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
|Nicely done. Dreams are capable of bridging the distance of many miles. Of course, dogs have a special way of breaking that up.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Oh my goodness.........
talk about asteral projection!!!
this is so so romantic Sara!!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You have some powerful dreams!|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|After having been praised by such esteemed writers as those below me, what can I say? This moron enjoyed it.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wow!! Sara you are a dreamer just like me...hehehehe!!
Wow!! Love this piece to the "T"!!
I am as okay as can be.....wunderbaaaaar as a matter of fact!!
|Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader)
|Yeah, great poem!|