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| Reviewed by Michelle Smolen |
6/6/2004 |
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Reindeer,
Now this is my absolute favorite!(lol) So many of yours are but this one speaks to me so deeply. I love the way you go from season to season finding beauty in each one. Alas, spring is the maiden now isn't she? Meditative and alluring...Brillant!
Merry Met~Shell |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/26/2004 |
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| This is a totally melting and harmonious write that makes me truly appreciate the gift of being alive - and the beautiful world we have been given to live in. I shall breathe deeply and lift my sights heavenwards. Thank you, Reindeer, for your soulful affinity with the world you inhabit. Go softly, gentle Traveller!! Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr |
4/26/2004 |
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excellent!! so many times in our busy life we forget to stop and listen to earth's sounds and to enjoy the seasons..
spring no doubt is one that should put a big smile on everyones face if we would just stop and listen..
thank you and enjoyed this
Tommy |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
4/26/2004 |
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| Great write and very wise thoughts :-) |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
4/26/2004 |
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Listen…
Do you hear it?
The earth is singing again,
Lovely songs that it learned so long ago,
The rain falling on the trees,
Making the leaves blow softly,
They sway in sweet ecstasy,
Dancing in the wind
wow....heartfelt write...very very excellent!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
4/25/2004 |
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Reindeer...very beautiful and inspiring work here.
Really enjoyed reading it...floria |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
4/25/2004 |
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| Beautiful and Heartfelt. |
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| Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) |
4/25/2004 |
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Lovely and beautifully coded versa with simple heart and thoughts ... Loved the lines so much ...
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
4/25/2004 |
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love those songs the changing of season
my favorite is fall |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/25/2004 |
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| wonderfully uplifting poem! |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
4/24/2004 |
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Romantic You!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
4/24/2004 |
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| Singing with Spring, Reindeer. Such a treasure, this one. Dawn |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/24/2004 |
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| Earth songs are the best songs, Retta. Thank you for this beautiful offering. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Mary Quire |
4/24/2004 |
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I love nature poems and this has just done what I think all of them should do; paint a picture that makes you feel that you are there. Very well done.
M.Rose |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
4/24/2004 |
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"You see it all around you,
Thin lips once cold and grim,
Now relax and smile again,
I hope Spring makes you smile too…
It will you know,
If you will just stop a minute,
And listen…"
Delightful, Reindeer!
Loved these last two stanzas! |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader) |
4/24/2004 |
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Beautiful title, Reindeer. And your poetry is just so lovely, it has such a gentle radiance! This a fine piece, wonderfully written!
Love, Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/24/2004 |
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| Awesomely enchanting and most beautiful, Reindeer. Truly enjoyed this! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/24/2004 |
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| Leaves me with thoughts of a lonely world before any creatures existed, then sit back and meditate at the world from a one day visitors view. This one sure is for keeps. One of my fav's... |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/24/2004 |
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| Wonderful write that is captivating |
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
4/24/2004 |
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I like this.
I especially like the shifting of the senses from the visible to the audible--nicely done
john+ |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/24/2004 |
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Beautiful imagery here Retta....The earth does speak to us hey!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
4/24/2004 |
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| Ah, yes, Spring! Wonderful time of the year. Romance. Warming days. Cool, not cold, nights. Budding of living things. Oh! Forgot. SPLAT!!! Got him. Mosquitoes. Drat. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Hale |
4/24/2004 |
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Ah, what a fine ear you have, Reindeer!! Thank you so much for reminding us to listen! Lovely write!
Peace. |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
4/24/2004 |
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Retta, yes it will make you smile if you listen. So many wonderful things it has to say too.
There is nothing anymore touching than the sounds of nature awakening. Excellently written. Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
4/24/2004 |
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I hope Spring makes you smile too…
It will you know,
If you will just stop a minute,
And listen…
< < < < <Gentle and touching....I am loving your poetry lately...Rein!!
Debashish |
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| Reviewed by Allan Aguilar (Reader) |
4/23/2004 |
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your words are truly like Spring...
very Lovely lines...uplifting!
love your works! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
4/23/2004 |
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| Beautiful, Retta. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/23/2004 |
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Reindeer, this is an uplifting of the heart!
As vibrant as spring itself! wonderfully written! |
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| Reviewed by William J. Cryer (Reader) |
4/23/2004 |
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| Beautiful! And when Spring's last song echoes through the valleys and woods, it is a time of mourning. Nice work, Reindeer. |
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