|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was lovely, beautiful poem!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Ah, yes. But along with his penetrating blue/brown/green eyes it was the ego part that first attracted you. The poem was well written and touching.|
|Reviewed by James Justice
|I liked this one very nice.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Very nice writing Dawn..
sad and lovely...I love the tale..
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|Nicely done, Milady Dawn... I've not departed; I've simply been caged, by forces that would attempt to keep us apart. Fret not, for I shall return. Your Lancelot.|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
< < < < < < < < < < < < < < < <"In my dream you were Lancelot
who’d turned back from the ego’s endless
exercise. In excessive light
of day I cannot find you, Lancelot."
This is WOW.
Peg from egos edge
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Excellent write Dawn! very intersting premise...
illusions, dreams, all go astray... at times we lose our way;-)
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|He's deaded..Sound write....|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Interesting write indeed! I enjoyed.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~