|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|This would make a great ballad set to music.
Well done, Jim.
|Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme
|Jim, this poem is wonderful. You are full of good thoughts :0)|
|Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
|It's good you can be so positive and uplifting.|
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
Breakfast of champions… Poetry & Coffee. Excellent write. What’s for lunch?
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Beautiful poem Shy poet,full os the sweetness and rapture of spring,fresh and lovely!
Love and best wishes
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A lovely poetic tale, ShyPoet. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|DELIGHTFUL writing, Jimmy!|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Ron what a wonderful writing. Held on to each word and expression. I could feel inside of me the goings on of both persons in the poem. HOW WELL YOU WROTE THIS! Bill
....hope you are feeling better....
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|To a white British girl like me, Shy, this is an adorable portrayal of everything I love about your easy, rhythmic, lyrical and verbose Black ways!! It is honest, gentle and yet tinged with the sanguine heat and passion of the Black feel-good factor that so many of us (UK!!) bloodless whites miss out on! I also loved the reciprocity of feelings shared between the hero and heroine here: that she had been away, and yet still lonely, as indeed he was having stayed at home and waited...but what a springtime they will have now they are together! Uplifting and satisfying write, Shy... just like the Big Breakfast you missed out on in order to give us this food for thought to relish! Thank you. KB|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Excellent write, Shy Poet...
Enjoyed it very much!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|I love this one SHY it is so well written and expressed....
Always love the notations notes....
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Jim I thoroughly enjoyed this winsome wondrous write!
You are a gifted poet with much talent and flair!;-)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|delightful poem/tale ... well penned ...|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was lovely, a delightful poem!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
delightful, delightful read--enjoyed the flavor of this one
((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|This was pure delight Shy...You have never
written like this before as far as I can
remember....it was fun..I love the play on
words...really enjoyed reading it...my tongue
got a bit twisted...LOL....good writing again..
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|I loved the lilting phrasing in this, Jimmy!
Wonder what you will come up with for the next
two meals...hee hee.
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|hahahaha i do enjoy you
she sounds kinda familiar
liked the wordiness
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|I did enjoy it Shy- now you can look forward to lunch! Lisa|