|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Intensely romantic and beautiful, William.|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Great passionate write, William!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|powerfully passionate poem!|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|The fireman sets the soul on fire in this passionate piece.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|William, you know you didn't want this to end! Passion is something hard to find..so hold on to it as long as it's possible!
Great work! Lisa
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|I like the passion in this dream...and could see the dream of the passion...|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|William...very passionate write from you....excellent!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|don't sound like you really wanta go.......
i'll wake you when it's over :)
|Reviewed by Pamela Pittaway (Reader)
|William,wow I did not want his dream to end, so beautuful.
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|passionate poem...wonderful dream
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Exquisite write, William...
A beautiful dream...
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|To dream to sleep, great dream, dream on..|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|released from a dream into reality
bliss!! well done........pax A
|Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
|This is truly beautiful, William!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|mesmerizing William. Do you really want
to wake up from this dream?;-)
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Great write, captivating
at the end I wanted more
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Utterly beautiful William!!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Beautifully-done! Awesome write, William!
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Beautiful William..passionate lines...floria|