|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|And I Cupid with my little arrows, and I will use just one to strike the center of your heart, and capture all the brilliant facets of your being; placing them in the most beautiful rainbow ever known by man or the Gods. This is a wonderful poem that outshines the stars. And the rainbow created by Cupid will guide me on my journey to the Heavens; where you reside, and I will sit at your feet on a cloud and listen while you recite words of love and hope and beauty; enchanting me forever.
P.S. Your words are what dreams are made of. Bill
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Wow..I loved this, beautiful and strong poetry!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|no doubt, the fragrance of your heart still surrounds his thoughts ...|
|Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
|Great beginning and great end ...
In fact, great poem al the way thru ...
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I'm stunned by this use of the elements Kate!
Your ingenuity is on display in this brilliant poem!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Very intelligent, and kinda mysterious too.
Hope God answers your prayers, then you could show a before the after pic..lol
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
If the person this is directed to, had nothing but a beautiful
tribute like this one, they would have definitely felt "something
missing," when you were gone.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|This is lucid and beautiful Kate!
"In solid form
I am Topaz, Golden Corundum:
But put me to the flame
and my essential essence
I am gently curling strands,
the perfumed smoke which rises
from the newly snuffed-out wick
and the scent of molten liquid wax"
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful work! I like how your weaved the words around those elements of life.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|BRILLIANT....I love the play with different elements and the conveyance of a PROFOUND message...
PS..consider a transpose for L3 and L4 in S1