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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
4/27/2004 |
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And I Cupid with my little arrows, and I will use just one to strike the center of your heart, and capture all the brilliant facets of your being; placing them in the most beautiful rainbow ever known by man or the Gods. This is a wonderful poem that outshines the stars. And the rainbow created by Cupid will guide me on my journey to the Heavens; where you reside, and I will sit at your feet on a cloud and listen while you recite words of love and hope and beauty; enchanting me forever.
P.S. Your words are what dreams are made of. Bill |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/27/2004 |
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Wow..I loved this, beautiful and strong poetry!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/26/2004 |
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| no doubt, the fragrance of your heart still surrounds his thoughts ... |
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| Reviewed by . ShyPoet1 |
4/26/2004 |
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Great beginning and great end ...
In fact, great poem al the way thru ...
Well done! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/26/2004 |
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I'm stunned by this use of the elements Kate!
Your ingenuity is on display in this brilliant poem! |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/26/2004 |
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Very intelligent, and kinda mysterious too.
Hope God answers your prayers, then you could show a before the after pic..lol |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
4/26/2004 |
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| Powerful write! |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz |
4/26/2004 |
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Wow!
If the person this is directed to, had nothing but a beautiful
tribute like this one, they would have definitely felt "something
missing," when you were gone. |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
4/26/2004 |
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This is lucid and beautiful Kate!
"In solid form
I am Topaz, Golden Corundum:
resinous, translucent,
fluoriferous
But put me to the flame
and my essential essence
is unlocked;
I am gently curling strands,
the perfumed smoke which rises
from the newly snuffed-out wick
and the scent of molten liquid wax" |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
4/26/2004 |
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very mystical.........
magical.........beaautiful!!!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
4/26/2004 |
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Wonderful work! I like how your weaved the words around those elements of life.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~ |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) |
4/26/2004 |
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BRILLIANT....I love the play with different elements and the conveyance of a PROFOUND message...
Debashish
PS..consider a transpose for L3 and L4 in S1 |
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