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A Touch of Irony
by Dan Rains

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Pages full of words
Ravings of half mad poets
Cloud my mind with emotion
Love, hate, anger, passion

Too many feelings
To feel at once.
Frustration...pains
Confusion...reigns

Words splashed upon the page
And called a poem
Like as a painter squirting globs of paint upon a canvas
And calling it art

Meaningless...random words...
that say so much!

As if I didn't have enough enemies.

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Reviewed by Sara Coslett
LOL...this was pretty funny. And a very apt description of what goes into the making of a poem. Words do cause havoc at times. Especially the written word. We can't hide from them.

I think my all time favorite of this poem is this: "Frustration...pains/Confusion...reigns."

Great work Dan. I am very happy that you invited me to your den. And sad I didn't stop in sooner. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Safi aifas32@gmail.com
Good one!

Safi
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
You've made a great splash here. From one artist to another - write on or paint on...your preference. Guess its all in how you want to see the world. Nice poem. ~Trish~
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
I pressed the wrong button while sending to another poem so I am commenting on two here. I like the way you expressed yourself here. I forgot until I started writing here just how much of the heart is seen when placing words on a page. The second comment is for a Later Winter Morning. It is the little things that are so important and you show it well in that poem. I also understand the frustration of the camera not getting the picture you had in mind........Its the camera really!!! not me.
Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Yes expression certainly comes in many forms~
Reviewed by Silvia (Reader)
Very creative ... enjoyed it!
Nice too see your works here.
Reviewed by Sharron Tyrrell
Excellent !!!!!
Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
Yes, your words say so much. There are about four emotions here that you can elaborate on in perhaps another poem? ;) One emotion at a time. But, then again, an artist does not use just one color to paint a picture. I like the splashing of feelings here.
Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
with the friends we all have who needs enemies!!
Reviewed by Heidi Greenhaw
This is good, really good. You have captured the essence of a poetic mind. Words are the paint that create the image. The type and font are the painters brush. Random emotions captured on paper....words are powerful!
Bravo, I really enjoyed this one.
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Oh yes, I hear ya Dan!

Janet :)
Reviewed by Lisa Cannons
Well splashed indeed my friend <wink>
Reviewed by jude forese
well splashed...
Reviewed by Shelly (Reader)
Great write..it speaks with feeling
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Sorry Dan......Some corrections here from my last response:

~~~~~~~~~


A man who manages a shop
is called a "manager"

A person who sings
is called a "singer"

A person who reads
is called a "reader"

A person who speaks
is called a "speaker"

A person who sells
is called a "seller"

A person who buys
is called a "buyer"

....but.....

A person who writes a poem
is not called a poemer;
and is called a "Poet".

.....and.....

of course,
a "Poet" writes "Poems"!

(c) Sandie Angel :o)
March 23, 2002.
Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
Great writing but what is your point? I stand alone and smile and watch.............
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Hahaha! Whaddya think?

A man who manages a shop
is called a manager

A person so sings
is called a "singer"

A person who reads
is called a "reader"

A person who speaks
is called a "speaker"

A person who sells
is called a "seller"

A person who buys
is called a "buyer"

....but.....

A person who writes a poem
is not called a poemer;
and is called a "Poet".

.....and.....

of course,
a "Poet" writes "Poems"!

Sandie Angel :o)
March 23, 2002.
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
The wonderful madness of words! :)
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Namaste my friend;
It's good to see you here. <smile> among friends. Its funny, isn't it.. how sometimes those random words just seem to fall into place.
Love and Light
dreamweaver
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