|Reviewed by YADUVANSHI NEHA
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|Awesome, a masterful depiction of truth.|
|Reviewed by Sekou-Ajene Tafari
|The beauty of Creation... Wombman. Nice poem.|
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|To me, this poem is the essense of what life and poetry is all about.A powerful beauty.|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|No Bhuwan, you are so right! There is nothing better in this world than holding a tiny infant and glorying God giving the baby to the world. Your understanding will always surpass your years ... no matter the age you attain. Your Friend Bill|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|You are so right. There is nothing
as creative or wonderful as a mother and
her child being born. I got to witness
my three childrens births and what a joy.
It can't be described by mere words.
A wonderful piece!
|Reviewed by Jane Rodway
|It's great to read such a beautiful poem! The photo adds to it, as well.|
|Reviewed by JimmyHolder ShyPoet1
|Excellent poem as always.
Your muse is certainly creative, unique, and bold.
- Fine, well-thought-out divine work as usual!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You've penned a masterpiece of a poem, Bhuwan. Wonderful! Wonderful picture, too.|
|Reviewed by Roxanne Smolen
|Perfect . . . Thank you for sharing this.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This is absolutely beautiful!|
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
Although as a man, and I know our species cannot give live birth, yet looking at that sacred picture you placed with this magnificent poem, flooded my mind with the glorious memories, I shall always have of when my son’s were born. I was very fortunate to have been allowed in the operating room, when all my children were brought into this world. I can clearly remember those days as if they were yesterday. As soon as the Doctor’s did their thing, I held each one of them into my trembling hands, and thanked my wife for the beautiful gifts that she gave me.
I think all Fathers should be with their wives, girlfriends or whatever, when a child is born. I feel it might help make us realize what a wonderful and truly precious gift we were given, along with the awesome responsibility it carries, (not to mention of course what it does do too, and for the woman who carried it for nine months). I do agree with Eileen, that this picture should be plastered everywhere for the sake of the children, and for the folks that have helped conceived a child. Maybe then we wouldn’t have so many children having children, or having any child wandering aimlessly around without the proper love and guidance a child should have. What a tremendous poem. Well done kind Sir.
Best of luck to you and yours,
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Incredbibly beautiful and meaningful, Bhuwan. A pleasure to read.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Picture and words combine together to form a gleaming jewel here, Bhuwan, and a flaming torch to kindle hearts and minds of all who look and listen: may they be many!! Life is the pinnacle of all creation and we demystify and disrespect it to our utter shame and peril. The complex miracle of physical development and growth in the womb is merely the outward manifestation of this spiritual truth. Thanks to you indeed for this truly beautiful write. Kate|
|Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay
|Reviewed by jude forese
|your poetic skills excell in this poem! bravo!|
|Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
|PROFOUND write my friend...I love the flow and structure and the message(not to mention) in this masterful poem!
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Bhuwan this is so touching...I adore that
picture...My grandson was that tiny when he
was born prematurely...how sweet your poem is..
and how true...floria
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Awwwwwwwwwwww momy love....this is so true Bhuwan!!
Awwww that picture is adorable !!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This is what makes you
an outstanding poet.
This is art..
LOVE n Luck.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Bhuwan! You should send this to papers and magazines
put it in schools where children can learn to respect
life once again. To know that birth is unique and babies
are gifts to be cherished and nurtured! Thank you for being
so compassionate and wise, to write such gems!Kudo's!
|Reviewed by A PAX
|ty for this..........i am saving it!!! You've made my heart smile today..........pax A|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so beautiful, so lovely and true, outstanding Bhuwan!
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Exquisit! You have a big heart, Bhuwan, and it shines through your work.