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A Haiku Moment
by Lori L Moore
Saturday, May 01, 2004
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The haiku master of yesterday as well as those who really practice the craft speak of having a "haiku moment." I had a moment of something, haiku or not.

a haiku moment
birthed within my inner man
sweet simplicity

manifested sons
risen with the one before
overcoming all

silent temptation
great risk of reaching higher
victory within

new life springs within
visions higher dwelling place
hopes reality

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Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty 5/21/2004
love it
I think my days must be filled of haiku moments
only because I seem to be such a haiku-a-holic
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 5/6/2004
nice haiku Lori, enjoyed the haiku moment it took to read this.. hugs. G
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang 5/2/2004
Wonderful inspirational moment!
Great Haiku!
Thanks for past reviews!
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 5/2/2004
Heh heh at your note Lori...these are
wonderful I especially love the last one..
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 5/2/2004
Welcome back, Lori - and what a homecoming! A pure epiphany, by the look! I'm with Ed - I especially like the last ku, speaking as it does of the combination of vision and hope: the latter being birthed by the former. I would say that the thought in these three lines is complete. You must have been reading my thoughts as I was about to post you a message to ask how you were... now I know: inspired, as always! Thank you for this little gift. Love Kate xx
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 5/2/2004
Wonderful Haiku poems, Lori!

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/2/2004
Each haiku completents the others to complete the meaning of this piece. Nicely done, Lori. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by E T Waldron 5/2/2004
Each one superb, together a glorious affirmation!
Beautifully crafted Lori!
Reviewed by jude forese 5/2/2004
excellent haiku forming the body of this poem ...
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/2/2004
Whatever you had - it is good. Especially like the last one.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader) 5/2/2004
brilliant write in Haiku...I am sure even Ikeda will attest this...

you maintain the sacti-sanctum of imagery in these ku meter so well...

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 5/2/2004
Bill is right, this is great stuff.
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 5/1/2004
Lori, what you really had were great moments of insight and wisdom. Very good. Bill Murray
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