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Another Lethal Repetition
by Lori L Moore
Saturday, March 23, 2002

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Screams escape from the depths of my murdered innocence
Terror reigns as I see shadows of their unforgotten faces
Holding me, they tear away all hope of cherished modesty
I die again a virgin's death with each new blunt invasion...
Purity struggles for every breath in my otherwise guiltless setting
I cry, but my tears do not wash the toxic stains of
primordial aggression
I awake, another dream, another panic in the night
My heart cries once more, knowing that tomorrow is another day
Another lethal repetition, obsessed that they are there

Based upon my experience with Post Traumatic Stress Disorder

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Reviewed by richard poor 1/6/2003
jus let it all out....too good!!!
Reviewed by Romantic Scorpio (Reader) 6/23/2002
Powerful sympathy and understanding with intese vocabulary. EXCELLENT!!!!
Reviewed by John Hutchinson 6/4/2002
It is unfortunate when there has to be terror in truth.
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader) 5/31/2002
It is terrible that one person could do so much damage to another but it does happen.
I have read a number of your stuff and it really seems you are calling out for help or just trying to release the pain inside
which ever it is you have come to the right place there are a lot of good people on this site that maybe to help.
If you need a friend or an ear, You already have one.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor 5/27/2002
Another fantastic piece. You are very talented indeed.
Reviewed by Sue Hess 5/26/2002
lori, i think you have found a great outlet for any emotion, and you seem to have a talent for expression which should serve you well in a courtroom someday, as well as in poetry. good luck!
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 5/25/2002
"Purity struggles for every breath"..."toxic stains". . .powerful, powerful, powerful!
I feel guilty because the form gives me pleasure...and you have endured so much. Your strength is beautiful, and your honesty. Even more, the fact that you are reaching out so others will feel less alone.
Reviewed by Joe McCarthy 5/25/2002
Excellent title. Excellent poem.
Reviewed by Sheryl Sorenson (Reader) 5/24/2002
Hi Lori~ I've been using poetry as a form of therapy myself. I think it's great that you can express yourself so powerfully in this poem. PTSD is a terrible are taking back the power in this poem, and hopefully in your life. Excellent!
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe 3/31/2002
A very powerful piece
Reviewed by Jo Janoski 3/30/2002
Oh my! Riveting and haunting...
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 3/29/2002
moving write....
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader) 3/28/2002
It will exist. Memories never leave you dear. Don't even try to run away. But we have to move on. Move on with these memories somewhere behind...but still least ur not being fake to yourself. Babes, life is each and every moment. Remember, God is there to punish. So no remorse...such feelings shouldn't exist. You're a strong woman, stay like this and you're a virgin at heart. You will remain like this. You never lose it till you lose it to the guy you want to. It's all in the mind! Love you loads...take care and stay strong!
Reviewed by Joel Young 3/27/2002

Gripping images. I've been close to the cliff's edge, seen myself fall more than times not, and felt the devil's hound nipping at my heels. It rang true. Thanks. :)

Reviewed by Joel Young 3/24/2002
Excellent work Lori.
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 3/24/2002
Fantastic expression I also agree with Trask~
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/24/2002
Sad and scary dream. Writing it out is the 1st step to recovery. Don't let that bottled inside you.

{{{{{ HUGZ }}}}}

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Robin Labenberg 3/24/2002
Hello..was hoping you would show up..intense reading and feelings..
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 3/24/2002
((((((( Lori )))))) Just wanted you to know, I read it, I care, and I am here if you ever need to talk. TRASK does have a good point. Surround yourself with beauty and comfort at night hun. Wether it be a red stem rose, a Enya CD set on play continous, a teddy bear.. an dknow you have many, many people who care and are rooting for you hun.
Love and Light
Reviewed by E T Waldron 3/23/2002
A gripping write
Reviewed by William Manchee 3/23/2002
Very moving. Hope all that is history.
Reviewed by Dan Rains 3/23/2002
Hard to read the second time too. Glad to find you. Dan
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 3/23/2002

All Thing's Can Be Overcome ---Writing It
Is The 1st Step, Walking away From It Is
Hard To Do,But, Only Alone You Can Do It!

Place a Long Stem Red Rose In Your Bedroom Whence You Go To Sleep . Night,Tell Yourself
You Will Only Have Beautiful Psychic Dream's!

You Think the above Is Fantasy, Then Your Poem Is The Greatest Fantasy Of All!

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